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bangel95 Tue Sep 02, 2008 6:28 am
i have started writing a story wat does every1 think of the 1st chapter AND INTRO..
INTRO;
A storm was brewing, the clouds were as back as black could be, the thunder sounded as if they were laughing. As if they knew something was bad was going to happen.
“All hands on deck!!!!!!” Boomed a extremely deep voice.
BANG
The ship rolled over into the waves below.
MINI chapter 1;
Jasmine woke suddenly.
She looked up but her eyes were clouded, everything looked bleak. She vigorously rubbed clear revealing to her horrific sight. The ship she was used to sailing without a care was now needlessly thrown of the choppy waters and onto land. The sails were broken, the hull bashed with wood spread all round as if the boat had been dropped from the highest point in the sky.
Jasmine slowly stumbled over to the wreck.
if u like it plz say and i will write more... plus if anyone else has any stories plz tell em
INTRO;
A storm was brewing, the clouds were as back as black could be, the thunder sounded as if they were laughing. As if they knew something was bad was going to happen.
“All hands on deck!!!!!!” Boomed a extremely deep voice.
BANG
The ship rolled over into the waves below.
MINI chapter 1;
Jasmine woke suddenly.
She looked up but her eyes were clouded, everything looked bleak. She vigorously rubbed clear revealing to her horrific sight. The ship she was used to sailing without a care was now needlessly thrown of the choppy waters and onto land. The sails were broken, the hull bashed with wood spread all round as if the boat had been dropped from the highest point in the sky.
Jasmine slowly stumbled over to the wreck.
if u like it plz say and i will write more... plus if anyone else has any stories plz tell em
bangel95- Posts : 12
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